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RECENT YOU DID COOKERY COURSE AND YOUR FEEDBACK

RECENT YOU DID COOKERY COURSE AND YOUR FEEDBACK 5aeYe

Dear Sir or Madam, Last month I had a chance that I join your School's Cooking Class. It was given by Michelin Star Chef Mr. Gordon Ramsay. When I first hear the name of the chef I was so excited. Because I really interested with Michelin Chefs classes. I had too many classes by populer chefs and ofcourse it's improved my skill and vision. Due to my cooking classes experience I would like to take your attention to some organisation issues. I would have mentioned there was a too many trainees at school, nevertheless cooking area was not big enough. We learned many things from him, for instance, we learned how to make gnocchi, french soup and different cakes. But class was so crowded and noisy. Therefore, sometimes we couldn't hear eachother and couldn't understand. Especially nowadays we have to be more careful about social distance and hygiene issues because of the corona virus. However, class joiners will not care about distance, at least you can keep less number of trainee for next cooking class. If I compare with the other cooking class organisations you ought to develop your course organisations with these kinds of feedbacks from us. Thank you for your time. Best Regards, Meray TUTLU

Dear Sir or Madam,

Last month I had a chance that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 your School's Cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
Class
. It was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by Michelin Star Chef Mr. Gordon Ramsay. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I first
 hear the name of the chef I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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Because
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 interested with Michelin Chefs You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfamilycollectiondivisionschooldegreeleague
classes
. I had too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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classes
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populer
 chefs and Possible spelling mistake found.of course
ofcourse
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improved
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skill
 and vision.

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some
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organisation
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many
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big
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enough
. We learned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things from him, for instance
, we learned how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 gnocchi, french soup and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cakes. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 crowded and noisy. Therefore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 we couldn't hear Possible spelling mistake found.each other
eachother
 and couldn't understand. Especially
 nowadays we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be more careful about social distance and hygiene issues This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.coronavirus
corona virus
. However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 joiners will not care about distance, at least you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 less number of trainee for next
 cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I compare with the other cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisations' is British English.organizations
organisations
 you ought to develop your course Possible spelling mistake. 'organisations' is British English.organizations
organisations
 with these kinds of feedbacks from us. Thank you for your time.

Best Regards,

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Meray
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