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RECENT YOU DID COOKERY COURSE AND YOUR FEEDBACK

RECENT YOU DID COOKERY COURSE AND YOUR FEEDBACK 5aeYe
Dear Sir or Madam, Last month I had a chance that I join your School's Cooking Class. It was given by Michelin Star Chef Mr. Gordon Ramsay. When I first hear the name of the chef I was so excited. Because I really interested with Michelin Chefs classes. I had too many classes by populer chefs and ofcourse it's improved my skill and vision. Due to my cooking classes experience I would like to take your attention to some organisation issues. I would have mentioned there was a too many trainees at school, nevertheless cooking area was not big enough. We learned many things from him, for instance, we learned how to make gnocchi, french soup and different cakes. But class was so crowded and noisy. Therefore, sometimes we couldn't hear eachother and couldn't understand. Especially nowadays we have to be more careful about social distance and hygiene issues because of the corona virus. However, class joiners will not care about distance, at least you can keep less number of trainee for next cooking class. If I compare with the other cooking class organisations you ought to develop your course organisations with these kinds of feedbacks from us. Thank you for your time. Best Regards, Meray TUTLU
Dear Sir or Madam,

Last month I had a chance that I
join
your School's Cooking
Class
. It was
given
by Michelin Star Chef Mr. Gordon Ramsay.
When
I
first
hear the name of the chef I was
so
excited.
Because
I
really
interested with Michelin Chefs
classes
. I had too
many
classes
by
populer
chefs and
ofcourse
it's
improved
my
skill
and vision.

Due to my cooking
classes
experience I would like to take your attention to
some
organisation
issues. I would have mentioned there was a too
many
trainees at school,
nevertheless
cooking area was not
big
enough
. We learned
many
things from him,
for instance
, we learned how to
make
gnocchi, french soup and
different
cakes.
But
class
was
so
crowded and noisy.
Therefore
,
sometimes
we couldn't hear
eachother
and couldn't understand.
Especially
nowadays we
have to
be more careful about social distance and hygiene issues
because
of the
corona virus
.
However
,
class
joiners will not care about distance, at least you can
keep
less number of trainee for
next
cooking
class
.

If
I compare with the other cooking
class
organisations
you ought to develop your course
organisations
with these kinds of feedbacks from us. Thank you for your time.

Best Regards,

Meray
TUTLU
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IELTS letter RECENT YOU DID COOKERY COURSE AND YOUR FEEDBACK

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6.0
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