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Question: You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television. Describe the television. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

Question: You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television. Describe the television. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it rVAN
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well. I heard about your new car. I am really excited to see it and have a ride in it with you. As you know I am moving out of country, as such, my life as become very hectic in preparation of the move out. I have to sell off my television before I migrate to Canada. I remember we had a chat once that you are looking out for a second hand television with same configuration as mine. So, I wanted to check with you if you are still looking out for the television. It is 43 inch LG LED television. It was purchased on 10th October, 2019. Although it is 18 months old, we had hardly used it as we are working and we don’t get time to watch it. It has dolby sound effect which is by far the best feature available in any television. I would suggest you to visit my house next Sunday that is 14th March, 2021 to have a look at the product. If that interests you we can talk further on it. Keep in touch Ankita
Dear Sam,

Hope you are doing well. I heard about your new car. I am
really
excited to
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see
it and have a ride in it with you.

As you know I am moving out of country, as such, my life as become
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very
hectic in preparation of the
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move
out. I
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have to
sell off my television
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before
I migrate to Canada. I remember we had a chat once that you are looking out for a second hand television with same configuration as mine.
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So
, I wanted to
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check
with you if you are
still
looking out for the television.

It is
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43 inch
LG LED television. It was
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purchased
on 10th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "October 2019".
October, 2019
. Although it is 18 months
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old
, we had hardly
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used
it as we are
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
working and
we don’t
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get
time to
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watch
it. It has
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dolby
sound effect which is by far the best feature available in any television.

I would suggest you to visit my
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house
next
Sunday
that is
14th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "March 2021".
March, 2021
to have a look at the product.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
that interests you we can talk
further
on it.

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Keep
in touch

Ankita
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IELTS letter Question: You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television. Describe the television. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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189 words
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