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An email to a friend and tell more details about your friend.

An email to a friend and tell more details about your friend. j8Op8
Hi Yuya We haven't seen a long time. What are you doing now? I hope you will happy in your days. The reason, I wrote e-mail to you is I want to talk about my new friend. Last year, we meet in a birthday party. Her name is lia. We are the same age. She is 19 too. She is so cute and has a good-manner. And She is a little popular in university. We became friend are not long but we are so friendly. When I needs a help, she always help me. And she is a rich kid. But we have been a fight. It's just like missunderstanding not a big problem. Now we are fine. I want to talk about her family too. Their family is so rich. Her mother has three Jewelry stores. And Her father is a bussiness man. Her father want Lia to help in his works. But she don't intresting that works. She want to be a designer. And she also good at drawing. About that case, she always have a fight with her father. I hope her father will accept later. So Yuya if we meet in outside, I will introduce you and her. I'm attending English class currently. I want to improve my Eng skill. If I'm bore, it's not ok. So I decided to attend class. And can you recommon any app and YT channel? I think I'm talking too many. If you saw my e-mail, please send reply to me. I want to know your about too. So Have a great day babe girl. See you soon. Your bestie, July
Hi
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Yuya


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a long time. What are you doing
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now
? I hope you
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will happy
in your days. The reason, I wrote e-mail to you is I
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want
to talk about my new friend. Last year, we
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meet
in a birthday party. Her name is
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lia
. We are the same age. She is 19 too. She is
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so
cute and has a
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good
-manner. And She is a
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little
popular in university. We became friend are not long
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but
we are
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so
friendly. When I
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needs
a
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help
, she always
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help
me. And she is a rich kid.
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we have been a fight. It's
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just
like
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missunderstanding
not a
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big
problem.
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Now
we are fine.

I
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want
to talk about her family too. Their family is
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so
rich. Her mother has three Jewelry stores. And Her
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father
is a
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bussiness
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man
. Her
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father
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want
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Lia
to
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help
in his works.
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But
she
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don't
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intresting
that works. She
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want
to be a designer. And
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she
also
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good
at drawing. About that case, she always
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have
a fight with her
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father
. I hope her
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father
will accept later.
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So
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Yuya
if we
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meet
in outside, I will introduce you and her.

I'm attending English
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class
currently
. I
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want
to
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improve
my Eng
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skill
. If I'm
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bore
, it's not ok.
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So
I decided to attend
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class
. And can you
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recommon
any app and YT channel? I
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think
I'm talking too
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many
.

If you
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saw
my e-mail,
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please
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send
reply to me. I
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want
to know your about too.
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So
Have a great day babe girl.
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See
you
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soon
.

Your bestie,

July
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IELTS letter An email to a friend and tell more details about your friend.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
270 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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