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Planning Trip with Friends

Planning Trip with Friends AJ97l
Dear Gray, How are you doing? I hope all is well! Then, I want to talk about our plans to spend time together with Paul. I set up a trip to Hokkaido, Japan, which boasts spectacular ski ranges and exciting snow festivals. Hakodate, one of its major cities, has one of the best sky tower views. Furthermore, another well-known city, Sapporo, provides delectable dishes such as lamb barbeque and fish roe soup. I have booked flights in business class seats in advance. Our accommodation will be at Conrad Sapporo, a prestigious hotel in the area, famous for its five-star amenities and hospitality. Furthermore, services from a well-reviewed transport service, Grab Herald, have already been arranged. Although I already planned most of the trip, I will still need your help identifying attractions to visit. Of course, you can include famous sites, but please do consider off-the-beaten-path places as well. It will also be appreciated if you brainstorm on the possible activities we can do when we arrive in these places. Thank you for taking the time to spend with us. I am looking forward to our upcoming excursion! Love, Carlo
Dear Gray,

How are you doing? I hope all is well! Then, I want to talk about our plans to spend time together with Paul.

I set up a trip to Hokkaido, Japan, which boasts spectacular ski ranges and exciting snow festivals.
Hakodate
, one of its major cities, has one of the best sky tower views.
Furthermore
, another well-known city, Sapporo, provides delectable dishes such as lamb
barbeque
and fish roe soup.

I have booked flights in business
class
seats in advance. Our accommodation will be at Conrad Sapporo, a prestigious hotel in the area,
famous
for its five-star amenities and hospitality.
Furthermore
, services from a well-reviewed transport service, Grab Herald, have already
been arranged
.

Although I already planned most of the trip, I will
still
need your
help
identifying
attractions to visit.
Of course
, you can include
famous
sites,
but
please
do consider off-the-beaten-path places
as well
. It will
also
be appreciated
if you brainstorm on the possible activities we can do when we arrive in these places.

Thank you for taking the time to spend with us. I am looking forward to our upcoming excursion!

Love
,

Carlo
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