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Letter to a company manager

Letter to a company manager eEjRK

Dear smith, The purpose of this letter is to express my interest to work in our head office for next half of the year. Firstly, i want to tell that i learned many things here in this office i want to get hands on more experties in different sections of the company that i could use in future. Moreover i want to give handover to my assistant who knows very well rwgarsing my job nature she wl fullfill the responsibilites during my absence. I would like to ask help from you it wl be much appriciated if u could arrange my transfer to our head office Thank you Yout sincerily Xyz

Dear smith, The purpose of this letter is to express my interest to work in our head office for next
 half of the year. Firstly
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 learned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things here in this office Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 hands on more Possible spelling mistake found.expertiseexpertises
experties
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 sections of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to give handover to my assistant who knows This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well Possible spelling mistake found.regarding
rwgarsing
 my job nature Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'she'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
she wl
Possible spelling mistake found.fulfillfull fill
fullfill
 the Possible spelling mistake found.responsibilities
responsibilites
 during my absence. I would like to ask This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 from Consider adding a comma here.you,
you
Possible mistake. Please verify.
it wl
 be much Possible spelling mistake found.appreciated
appriciated
 if u could arrange my transfer to our head Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphoffice.office!office?office:office,office;
office


Thank you Possible spelling mistake found.OutYouYourYouthBoutGout
Yout
Possible spelling mistake found.sinceritysincerely
sincerily


Possible spelling mistake found.XYZAYZCYZXYLYYZ
Xyz