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personal letter to friend

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Dear Sarah, I am sorry I have not written for so long. My work keeps me so busy, that I never have a minute to myself. I am writing to invite you to my wedding. Since you have newer met my future husband, you must have a million questions running through your mind right now. I hope I can tell you enough to put your mind at ease until we meet. Five months ago I decided to take a cruise to bahamas, to get away fro a little while. And on that cruise Faith arraigned for me to meet my future husband Alan. He is the most wonderful, loving person you could ever imagine and we are very happy together. The wedding will take place at my parent's mansion. The date is October 17, at 7 o'clock. I am so looking forward to introducing you to Alan, and he can not wait to meet you too. I told him all about you and our friendship. with Love, Amy.
Dear Sarah,

I am sorry I have not written for
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long. My work
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busy, that I never have a minute to myself. I am writing to invite you to my wedding.

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have a million questions running through your mind right
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to put your mind at
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until we
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. Five months ago I decided to take a cruise to
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while. And on that cruise Faith arraigned for me to
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my future husband Alan. He is the most wonderful, loving person you could ever
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happy together.

The wedding will take place at my parent's mansion. The date is October 17, at 7 o'clock. I am
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looking forward to introducing you to Alan, and he can not wait to
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you too. I
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him all about you and our friendship.

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Amy.

IELTS letter personal letter to friend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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