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a letter to little sister

a letter to little sister NVKJm
Dear little sis, Now that my birthday party weekend is over and I just wanted to let you know how much your birthday present means to me. I don't think I've ever gotten something as unique as this, hand-made picture album filled with images from our youth. These memories, I believe, have helped you and me stay together, and I hope that, even though we live a considerable distance away, I can add to this album every year when we visit each other. It was sad that you were not able to attend my actual birthday. I went kayaking with my friend to Siam Silver, a beautiful lake resort where we used to go when we had a chance to go to Thailand. Do you recall the peaceful mood there? Everything is still the same as it was. I hope you can be there next time. Love love love, Carrot
Dear
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sis,

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Now
that my birthday party weekend is over and I
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just
wanted to
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let
you know how much your birthday present means to me. I don't
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think
I've ever gotten something as unique as this, hand-made picture album filled with images from our youth.

These memories, I believe, have
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helped
you and me stay together, and I hope that,
even though
we
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live
a considerable distance away, I can
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add
to this album every year when we visit each other.

It was sad that you were not able to attend my actual birthday. I went kayaking with my friend to Siam Silver, a
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beautiful
lake resort where we
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used
to go when we had a chance to go to Thailand. Do you recall the peaceful mood there? Everything is
still
the same as it was.

I hope you can be there
next
time.

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Love
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love
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Carrot
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IELTS letter a letter to little sister

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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