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Dear Sis, Thanks for your last letter; it gave me a giggle on a boring Wednesday. As for me, I was out for my birthday last week; seven of us went to see a play at the Royal Exchange Theatre, and we stayed out late at a cocktail bar. The play was good, the drinks were many, and I had to take the next day off work with the world’s biggest hangover. I swear they get worse every year. I’ll be going to Spain for a couple of weeks next month, though, that’ll be good. That reminds me, send me those photos from your last holiday, that one to Croatia, when you went to all those music festivals - that sounded like the best time when you told me about it. I’m looking forward to going to a festival or two, myself, and I want to get a good idea of what the different ones are like. If you want to go with me next year, give me a shout ASAP. Love love love, Em
Dear Sis,

Thanks for your last letter; it gave me a giggle on a boring Wednesday.

As for me, I was out for my birthday last week; seven of us went to
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see
a play at the Royal Exchange
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Theatre
, and we stayed
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out
late at a cocktail bar. The play was
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good
, the drinks were
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many
, and I had to take the
next
day off work with the world’s biggest hangover. I swear they
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get
worse every year.

I’ll be going to Spain for a couple of weeks
next
month, though, that’ll be
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good
. That reminds me,
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send
me those photos from your last holiday, that one to Croatia, when you went to all those music festivals
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that sounded like the best time when you
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told
me about it.

I’m looking forward to going to a festival or two, myself, and I want to
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get
a
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good
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idea
of what the
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different
ones are like. If you want to
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go with
me
next
year, give me a shout ASAP.

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Love
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love
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,

Em
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IELTS letter write a letter to your sibling

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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