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letter to library for late book return

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Dear Sir, I am writing to apologize about keeping books that I borrowed from the college library 3 days ago longer than it is acceptable. I have found myself in this unpleasant situation for a reason. My close relative was very sick and I had to go visit him at the hospital. I intended to return the books immediately after I get back to the college, but unfortunately I left the books on a train on my way from the hospital to the library. It will take me about two days to get them back from "Lost and Found" department at the train station. I understand that other students may need those books and deeply apologize for the inconvenience. I will try to return the books as soon as possible. Please do not revoke my library privileges, I promise that it will never happen again. Faithfully yours, John Smith.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to apologize about keeping
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that I borrowed from the college library 3 days ago longer than it is acceptable.

I have found myself in this unpleasant situation for a reason. My close relative was
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very
sick and I had to go visit him at the hospital. I intended to return the
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books
immediately after I
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get
back to the college,
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but
unfortunately I
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left
the
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books
on a train on my way from the hospital to the library. It will take me about two days to
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get
them back from
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Lost and Found
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department at the train station.

I understand that other students may need those
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books
and
deeply
apologize for the inconvenience. I will try to return the
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books
as
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soon
as possible.
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do not revoke my library privileges, I promise that it will never happen again.

Faithfully
yours,

John Smith.
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IELTS letter letter to library for late book return

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  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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