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Ben, English-speaking friend of yours who makes films for a TV company, has written to you. Read the Ben’s letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to Ben, using all your notes.

Ben, English-speaking friend of yours who makes films for a TV company, has written to you. Read the Ben’s letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to Ben, using all your notes. NVKBy
Hello Ben Great idea! I am waiting forward to seeing you in my town. Wonderful choice, for your film. Therefore, it would be better if you come in August. Due to the fact that we have wonderful views in suburban, where has massive gardens. They look highly colorful with the eastern fruits and vegetables. Also, my town has a completely famous museum “Sovetskiy”, which has plenty of exhibitions. By the way, a number of exhibitions nobody can see anywhere. In addition, they're full of tourists every day. Otherwise, if you want to make a film about outside views I can help you. For the museum, sure that experience workers help you in that. Looking forward to seeing you then. Katya
Hello Ben

Great
idea
! I am waiting forward to seeing you in my town. Wonderful choice, for your film.

Therefore
, it would be better if you
come
in August. Due to the fact that we have wonderful views in suburban, where has massive gardens. They look
highly
colorful with the eastern fruits and vegetables.

Also
, my town has a completely
famous
museum “
Sovetskiy
”, which has
plenty
of exhibitions. By the way, a number of exhibitions nobody can
see
anywhere.

In addition
, they're full of tourists every day.
Otherwise
, if you want to
make
a film about outside views I can
help
you. For the museum, sure that experience workers
help
you in that.

Looking forward to seeing you then.

Katya
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IELTS letter Ben, English-speaking friend of yours who makes films for a TV company, has written to you. Read the Ben’s letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to Ben, using all your notes.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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