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Wtire an invitation letter to your friend who lives in another country

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SaraDear Nancy, I would be very glad if you could come to "New Year" holiday in my homeland, Uzbekistan. It is on the 1st of January but we celebrate this festival on the 31st of December evening along with our close relatives and friends. It is such an extremely exciting holiday I have ever seen so far that I desire you to come and see. Before two weeks, we bring fir tree and decorate it with colorful balloons and different types of little toys. On this day, we cooked various types of delicious dishes and of course tasty biscuits, sweets, a regal holiday cake as well. In addition, there are many concerts in the evening. Famous singers visit and sing the best songs for us. At 12 a. m New Year comes, we cheer up, wish the best congratulations one another. I have already arranged beforehand to visit some inresting historical places: Registan, Labi Hovuz, Xumo arena and Hilton. I do hope you will come and make us happy with your visit. We look forward to your arrival and welcome at the airport. Best regards, Sara
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SaraDear
Nancy,

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glad if you could
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New Year
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holiday in my homeland, Uzbekistan. It is on the 1st of January
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we celebrate this festival on the 31st of December evening along with our close relatives and friends.

It is such an
extremely
exciting holiday I have ever
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seen
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far that I desire you to
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come
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two weeks, we bring fir tree and decorate it with colorful balloons and
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types of
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toys. On this day, we cooked various types of delicious dishes and
of course
tasty biscuits, sweets, a regal holiday cake
as well
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, there are
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many
concerts in the evening.
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Famous
singers visit and sing the best songs for us. At 12 a. m New Year
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comes
, we cheer up, wish the best congratulations one another. I have already arranged beforehand to visit
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some
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inresting
historical places:
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Registan
,
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Labi
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Hovuz
,
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Xumo
arena and Hilton.

I do hope you will
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come
and
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make
us happy with your visit. We look forward to your arrival and welcome at the airport.

Best regards,

Sara
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IELTS letter Wtire an invitation letter to your friend who lives in another country

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6 paragraphs
185 words
5.5
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