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Bank sent a letter that you are overdrawn and you have pay charges, you know that this incorrect. Explain the bank what has happened and how to fix this.

Bank sent a letter that you are overdrawn and you have pay charges, you know that this incorrect. Explain the bank what has happened and how to fix this. gDjxO

Dear Sir, I would like to report that I have received a letter with information of $240 overdrawn and there is an interest amount $70 charged on my account but this is incorrect. I would like to mention that 3 years ago I had purchased a car on lease and every month $300 was being debited from account towards this lease payment however two months ago I have returned the car. Due to this reason, I had sent a letter to the bank manager to stop auto-debit $240 towards lease and close the account. Looking at your letter about overdraw and interest charges, it seems that my request was not honoured and auto-debit remain continued. Hence I request again to proceed with reversal of the debited amount and refund to me via cheque and close the accont as per my earlier request. Please settle this with garage owner for the amount which was wrongfully credit to them and also provide waiver on any additional charge which is levied on my account. Thank you, James Wise

Dear Sir,

I would like to report that I have received a letter with information of $240 overdrawn and there is an interest amount $70 charged on my account This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this is incorrect.

I would like to mention that 3 years ago I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a car on lease and every month $300 was being debited
 from account towards this lease payment however
 two months ago I have returned the car. Due to this reason, I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 a letter to the bank manager to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 auto-debit $240 towards lease and close the account.

Looking at your letter about overdraw and interest charges, it seems that my request was not Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.honored
honoured
 and auto-debit remain continued. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 I request again to proceed with reversal of the debited amount and refund to me via Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.check
cheque
 and close the Possible spelling mistake found.accountaccentaccostac cont
accont
 as per my earlier request.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 settle this with garage owner for the amount which was wrongfully
 credit to them and also
 provide waiver on any additional charge which is levied
 on my account.

Thank you,

James Wise