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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you regarding few supplies that are required. Firstly, I would like to get 25 LED bulbs, if they are not available ordinary filament bulbs will meet my requirements. Secondly, there is an urgency for electrical wires. Yestarday there was a smell of melted wire when I switched on my air conditioner and it is a 12 ampere rated wire, if it not available at your outlet, I would appreciate it if you could place an order for me. Finally I also require an AC to DC converter. In addition, It will be appreciated if I could know the price of the itmes that have been asked for. However, I will be out of station for a day and could you let me know how long you can hold the products for me. Please give the matter your immediate attention. Yours sincerely, John

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding few supplies that are required
.

Firstly
, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 25 LED bulbs, if they are not available ordinary filament bulbs will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 my requirements. Secondly
, there is an urgency for electrical wires. Possible spelling mistake found.Yesterday
Yestarday
 there was a smell of melted wire when I switched on my air Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).conditioner, and
conditioner and
 it is a 12 ampere rated wire, if It appears that a verb is missing.it is not
it not
 available at your outlet, I would appreciate it if you could place an order for me. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 I also
 require an AC to DC converter.

In addition
, It will be appreciated
 if I could know the price of the Possible spelling mistake found.timesitemsITESit mes
itmes
 that have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitedrequested
asked for
. However
, I will be out of station for a day and could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know how long you can hold the products for me.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 give the matter your immediate attention.

Yours sincerely
,

John