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Dear Rathnakumar, I am writing this letter for requesting you to support me in working at our head office in Sweden for a period of half a year. I understand that we are preparing a proposal for a Swedish government banking project and I believe we do have a healthy competition with fortune 100 companies to acquire this work. With my technical skill and expertise, I strongly feel that I could help in getting the job for us. Moreover, our management team resides in head office and we need business metrics from them to prepare our presentation. Consequently, I trust that I should work at our primary office to get it completed. While I travel to our main office, our critical deliveries, which I was the Lead for them, will be handled by Ramesh. Additionally, other usual tasks under my supervision will be supported by Ganesh. I need your hand to fulfill this requirement and I am sure you will take care of this. Please let me know if you need Yours sincerely, Ganeshkumar
Dear
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Rathnakumar
,

I am writing this letter for requesting you to support me in working at our head
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office
in Sweden for a period of half a year.

I understand that we are preparing a proposal for a Swedish
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
banking project and I believe we do have a healthy competition with fortune 100
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
to acquire this work. With my technical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
and expertise, I
strongly
feel that I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in getting the job for us.
Moreover
, our management team resides in head
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office and
we need business metrics from them to prepare our presentation.
Consequently
, I trust that I should work at our primary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it completed.

While I travel to our main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
, our critical deliveries, which I was the Lead for them, will
be handled
by Ramesh.
Additionally
, other usual tasks under my supervision will
be supported
by Ganesh.

I need your hand to fulfill this
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
requirement and
I am sure you will take care of this.

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Please
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let
me know if you need

Yours
sincerely
,

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Ganeshkumar
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  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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