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Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you visited before

Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you visited before 5399V
Dear Andrea, I hope you and Mark are doing fine. I'm so sorry it took me two weeks to reply to your email as I was too busy. Anyway, I have a perfect place in mind that you and Mark may consider visiting this coming holiday. Last year, I had an opportunity to finally explore my hometown, Tayabas, Quezon after being away for 16 years. It has changed a lot and it doesn’t seem like the town I grew up in. It was like being a tourist visiting a new place for the first time. Tayabas is just 3-hour drive away from Metro Manila. The place is ideal for you and Mark who love a laidback and mellow life as the weather there is reinvigorating and the air is fresh and cool which is a paradise as compared to a tour in the city. To complete the tourist feels, we opted to stay in a hotel instead of our ancestral home. The name of the place is Nawawalang Paraiso Hotel. I loved the service and the hospitality they offered. It's near the town proper so transportation is not a problem. Moreover, many tourist attractions are located within walking distance from this hotel. There are several things you can do in Tayabas including beach or mountain tour. You may also want to participate in heritage or historical tours, which by the way is my favorite, as the town is blessed with century-old churches, houses and bridges. I also have to mention the delicious food. Make sure to drop by at Kalye Budin to try their cassava cake. It's heavy on the stomach but light on the pocket. Another gastronomic treat is the famous Rodillas Yema Cake. You also shouldn't want to miss pancit lucban and lucban longganisa - the best noodle and sausage I've ever had. I wish you a pleasurable trip. I’d be happy to show you around and be your tour guide, I'm just a phone call away. Warm wishes, Yanna
Dear Andrea,

I hope you and Mark are doing fine. I'm
so
sorry it took me two weeks to reply to your email as I was too busy. Anyway, I have a perfect
place
in mind that you and Mark may consider visiting this coming holiday.

Last year, I had an opportunity to
finally
explore my hometown,
Tayabas
, Quezon after being away for 16 years. It has
changed
a lot and it doesn’t seem like the town I grew up in. It was like being a tourist visiting a new
place
for the
first
time.
Tayabas
is
just
3-hour drive away from Metro Manila. The
place
is ideal for you and Mark who
love
a
laidback
and mellow life as the weather there is reinvigorating and the air is fresh and cool which is a paradise as compared to a
tour
in the city.

To complete the tourist feels, we opted to stay in a hotel
instead
of our ancestral home. The name of the
place
is
Nawawalang
Paraiso
Hotel. I
loved
the service and the hospitality they offered. It's near the town proper
so
transportation is not a problem.
Moreover
,
many
tourist attractions
are located
within walking distance from this hotel.

There are several things you can do in
Tayabas
including beach or mountain
tour
. You may
also
want to participate in heritage or historical
tours
, which by the way is my favorite, as the town
is blessed
with century-
old
churches,
houses
and bridges.

I
also
have to
mention the delicious food.
Make
sure to drop by at
Kalye
Budin
to try their cassava cake. It's heavy on the stomach
but
light on the pocket. Another gastronomic treat is the
famous
Rodillas
Yema
Cake. You
also
shouldn't want to miss
pancit
lucban
and
lucban
longganisa
-
the best noodle and sausage I've ever had.

I wish you a pleasurable trip. I’d be happy to
show
you around and be your
tour
guide, I'm
just
a phone call away.

Warm wishes,

Yanna
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you visited before

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