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One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you

One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you J8N5
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I have been on cloud noun, since I came to know through your letter last week, that you are visiting my city next month. Unfortunately, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive. The reason is that I have a crucial meeting on the same time when your flight will land. I will be late by 1 hour; therefore, I humbly request you to wait for me in the waiting lounge, where you can have the breakfast also. By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am 6 feet tall with slim body. In addition, I will be wearing blue shirt and black trousers and holding the morning newspaper under my left arm. I am looking forward to our first meeting. Yours truly, Alpesh
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I have been on cloud noun, since I came to know through your letter last week, that you are visiting my city
next
month. Unfortunately, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you at the airport as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as you arrive.

The reason is that I have a crucial meeting on the same time when your flight will land. I will be late by 1 hour;
therefore
, I
humbly
request you to wait for me in the waiting lounge, where you can
When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "have breakfast".
have the breakfast
also
.

By the way, as we have never met I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you how to recognize me: I am
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
6 feet
tall with slim body.
In addition
, I will be wearing blue shirt and black trousers and holding the morning newspaper under my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
arm.

I am looking forward to our
first
meeting.

Yours
truly
,

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Alpesh

IELTS letter One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you

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  American English
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160 words
6.0
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