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Notice of Intimation about the office and factory operations.

Notice of Intimation about the office and factory operations. MMMoL
Dear All, Due to the unprecedented rise in Covid Cases across Mumbai and Maharashtra, it is decided that we will keep our office closed during this week as per dates mentioned above and Work from Home during this period. In case any of you can't work from home, please get in touch with either myself or Lopa and we will decide on the course of action for that particular person. This is to prevent or reduce the chances of any of us working at office to be infected by Covid. Please take the current spike in cases very very seriously and follow all the precautions that the authorities have prescribed. Stay Safe, Stay Healthy. Thanks, Anuj
Dear All,

Due to the unprecedented rise in
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
Cases across Mumbai and Maharashtra, it
is decided
that we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our office closed during this week as per dates mentioned above and Work from Home during this period.

In case any of you can't work from home,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in touch with either myself or
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Lopa and
we will decide on the course of action for that particular person.

This is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
or
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reduce
the chances
Consider simply using "of" instead.
of any of
us working at office to
be infected
by
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
.

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Please
take the
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current
spike in cases
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
seriously
and follow all the precautions that the authorities have prescribed.

Stay Safe, Stay Healthy.

Thanks,

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Anuj

IELTS letter Notice of Intimation about the office and factory operations.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
115 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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