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my plan trip for go to the new country

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Dear Jennie! Hello jennie, iam Catherine. How's it going? im fine and i think i will go to your country on friday day. Have you get free times to wait me at airport? Oh i really worried for my trip, i don't know what should i bring? can you give to me some advice? I think i need to bring comfortable clothes, shoes and some specialty food for you, it's very delicious and i think you will like that. My plan have rice paper, coconut candies, rice noodles soup with beef, sticky rice, and vegatables pickles, that is some favourite food but i afraid you can't eat or allergies. The leter to long, i hope you can reply my mail on the neargest day! See you later, Jennie!

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IELTS letter my plan trip for go to the new country

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American English

7 paragraphs

128 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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