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Dear Mr Mayor There is a children's playground in my neighborhood that children record some of happy memories in this playground where they experience a world of fun. That is the reason of why this place is important, but there is not enough light at night and children are a little further away from their parents when they are playing ,so lighting is essential for their safty. I urge you solve this problem as soon as possible. Could you please make sure that build enough lights in this park? your helping keep our children safe and thier parents will appreciate you. cordially maryam valipour

Dear Mr Mayor There is a children's playground in my neighborhood that children record some of happy memories in this playground where they experience a world of fun. That is the reason of why this place is important, but there is not enough light at night and children are a little further away from their parents when they are playing, so lighting is essential for their safty. I urge you solve this problem as soon as possible. Could you please make sure that build enough lights in this park? your helping keep our children safe and thier parents will appreciate you. cordially maryam valipour Prgyj
Dear Mr Mayor There is a children's playground in my neighborhood that children record some of happy memories in this playground where they experience a world of fun. That is the reason of why this place is important, but there is not enough light at night and children are a little further away from their parents when they are playing, so lighting is essential for their safty. I urge you solve this problem as soon as possible. Could you please make sure that build enough lights in this park? your helping keep our children safe and thier parents will appreciate you. cordially maryam valipour
Dear Mr Mayor

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of happy memories in this playground where they experience a world of fun.
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light at night and children are a
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further
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lighting is essential for their
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lights in this park?
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IELTS letter Dear Mr Mayor There is a children's playground in my neighborhood that children record some of happy memories in this playground where they experience a world of fun. That is the reason of why this place is important, but there is not enough light at night and children are a little further away from their parents when they are playing, so lighting is essential for their safty. I urge you solve this problem as soon as possible. Could you please make sure that build enough lights in this park? your helping keep our children safe and thier parents will appreciate you. cordially maryam valipour

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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