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Thank you letter for manager

Thank you letter for manager D61Dj

Hi Kalliopi, I was surprised to know about your retirement. I know we haven't worked for long time together but I used to feel very comfortable interacting with you be it in interview or during my onboarding process. I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to work with AspenTech. I wish you all the best for your future, good health. I want you to enjoy this second innings of your life to fullest. I would like to stay connected on LinkedIn.

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Kalliopi
,

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 to know about your retirement.

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used
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very
 comfortable interacting with you be it in interview or during my onboarding process. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to work with Possible spelling mistake found.SpeechAssented
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. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 wish you all the best for your future, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want you to enjoy this second innings of your life to fullest. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to stay connected on LinkedIn. 

IELTS letter Thank you letter for manager

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

85 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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