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Thank you letter for manager

Thank you letter for manager D61Dj
Hi Kalliopi, I was surprised to know about your retirement. I know we haven't worked for long time together but I used to feel very comfortable interacting with you be it in interview or during my onboarding process. I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to work with AspenTech. I wish you all the best for your future, good health. I want you to enjoy this second innings of your life to fullest. I would like to stay connected on LinkedIn.
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Kalliopi
,

I
was surprised
to know about your retirement.

I know we haven't worked for long time together
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but
I
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used
to feel
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very
comfortable interacting with you be it in interview or during my onboarding process.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to work with
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AspenTech
.
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I
wish you all the best for your future,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want you to enjoy this second innings of your life to fullest.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to stay connected on LinkedIn.
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IELTS letter Thank you letter for manager

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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