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I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning this matter of publicizing the voluntary vacancies where people can volunteer on weekends.

I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning this matter of publicizing the voluntary vacancies where people can volunteer on weekends. Vwpbm
Dear Mr. Tran Viet Quang, I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning this matter of publicizing the voluntary vacancies where people can volunteer on weekends. Due to the fact, there are various activities planned for the program on weekends such as teaching English, organize some games for children. There is not an abundance of the staff here to take care of the children and the main audience for these jobs are students at universities who have expertise in that field. Consequently, we need volunteers for the programmes. Furthermore, volunteers are required to participate every Sunday, the time is from 7am to 4pm. I would be most grateful if you could pass on and advertise the recruitment in the local newspaper published in the next week. I hope that you will agree because both volunteers and children will get a lot of benefits from our curriculum. For volunteers, it’s a great way to gain experience in numerous fields such as education, social work, healthcare. By cooperating and communicating with our children, other volunteers will increase social life skills especially communication skills. In addition, they will understand the value of sharing and the essence of generosity. It would likewise be valuable if we give loving values to children who have no parents will be educated like others, helping them somewhat alleviate their disadvantage. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I am looking forward to receiving your replies in near futur Yours sincerely,
Dear Mr. Tran
Viet
Quang
,

I am writing on behalf of a
children’s
home to request your assistance concerning this matter of publicizing the voluntary vacancies where
people
can
volunteer
on weekends.

Due to the fact, there are various activities planned for the program on weekends such as teaching English, organize
some
games for
children
. There is not an abundance of the staff here to take care of the
children
and the main audience for these jobs are students at universities who have expertise in that field.
Consequently
, we need
volunteers
for the
programmes
.
Furthermore
,
volunteers
are required
to participate every Sunday, the time is from 7am to 4pm.

I would be most grateful if you could pass on and advertise the recruitment in the local newspaper published in the
next
week. I hope that you will
agree
because
both
volunteers
and
children
will
get
a lot of
benefits from our curriculum. For
volunteers
, it’s a great way to gain experience in numerous fields such as education, social work, healthcare. By cooperating and communicating with our
children
, other
volunteers
will increase social life
skills
especially
communication
skills
.
In addition
, they will understand the value of sharing and the essence of generosity.

It would
likewise
be valuable if we give loving values to
children
who have no parents will
be educated
like others, helping them somewhat alleviate their disadvantage.

I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I am looking forward to receiving your replies in near
futur


Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning this matter of publicizing the voluntary vacancies where people can volunteer on weekends.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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