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My beautiful home in malang

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My house is location in Malang near the State Polytechnic of Malang. The concept of this house is minimalist. There is 3 bedrooms in the house. On the right, there is a garage only enough one car. Beside there is a garden and terrace. In garden there a lot of flowers and trees make the house look fresh. In front of the living room is kitchen include dining room. The living room has one big sofa, one big wooded table. Behind the kitchen, there is a washing room. On the left living room there is guest room. In front of the guest room there is a family room. In this room there are one television hanging on the wall, medium sofa, and one big carpet. Beside sofa there are two cat beds. My cats name is coco and gery, they are male. The bathroom is between guest room and bedroom one. In front of the bedroom one there is a great bedroom include bathroom. Behind the family room there is a small garden with some flowers and small fish pond. This house is not really big, because my family rarely at house.
My
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is location in
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Malang
near the State Polytechnic of
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Malang
. The concept of this
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is minimalist. There is 3
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bedrooms
in the
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. On the right, there is a garage
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one car. Beside there is a garden and terrace. In garden there
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a lot of
flowers and trees
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make
the
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look fresh.

In front of the living
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is kitchen include dining
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room
. The living
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has one
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big
sofa, one
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big
wooded table.

Behind the kitchen, there is a washing
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. On the
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left
living
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there is guest
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room
. In front of the guest
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there is a family
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room
. In this
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there are one television hanging on the wall, medium sofa, and one
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carpet. Beside sofa there are two cat beds. My cats name is coco and
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gery
, they are male.

The bathroom is between guest
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and
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one. In front of the
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one there is a great
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include bathroom. Behind the family
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there is a
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small
garden with
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some
flowers and
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fish pond
.

This
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is not
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,
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my family rarely at
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IELTS letter My beautiful home in malang

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5 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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