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Moving friend from another city write a letter to him?

Moving friend from another city write a letter to him? lNxD
Dear happu, Its very exciting to hear that you will be movie to caledon and congratulations for your new job. As you will probably be woking in the city center perhapes you could think about living near me in Brampton. Its a large town in GTA. There are people from all over yhe world and it has a friendly relaxed vibe. In terms of public transport, you can getaround Brampton by bus, train and ther underground. You should just get and transit card which will help you with public transport. I am so excited to see you in my town. Your faithfullyRandhir singh
Dear
happu
, Its
very
exciting to hear that you will be movie to
caledon
and congratulations
for
your new job.
As
you will
probably
be
woking
in the city center
perhapes
you could
think
about living near me in Brampton.
Its
a large town in GTA. There are
people
from all over
yhe
world and it has a friendly relaxed vibe. In terms of public transport, you can
getaround
Brampton by bus, train and
ther
underground. You should
just
get
and transit card which will
help
you with public transport. I am
so
excited to
see
you in my town. Your
faithfullyRandhir
singh
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IELTS letter Moving friend from another city write a letter to him?

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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