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Since I was a child my dream to study abroad grew even stronger. Fortunately, I learned to integrate into an other country with a different culture during short-period experiences. Firstly, twice I spent 1 month in Framingham in the USA, living with my cousins whom we shared English as a common language. Over this experience not only my English improved, but also I experienced a completely different lifestyle. I had a similar experience, when I participated in a 1-week-long school exchange program in Treviso. There we visited an italian school, I was introduced to the italian education system, and socialized with Italian children. I have participated in various international debating competitions where I made several international friends, and got to meet people from all around the world. The University of Groning is filled with students from all around the world, I want to keep on experiencing other cultures by studying abroad in the atmosphere of the Netherlands. The IRIO course fits me in every way. First I was introduced to IR during a short international relations seminar at Engame Academy. Since the end of the seminar, I have been waiting to broaden my knowledge about the theoretical sides of political issues. My interest in historic politics developed during advanced history lessons, a part of the course is International History, therefore I am keen on widening my knowledge even more. The course is strongly related to International Organizations. I have volunteered in organizations, such as NextStep, and have been part of the Amnesty Youth Club which made me realize that working at an organization is an appealing career path for me. Therefore the International Organization course is the most fitting way to educate myself on how the organizations actually work. During the course, there is an ongoing language subject which I look forward to because I want to extend my list of languages, I have spent many years perfecting my English, and Italian it is time to take up a new language. The last aspect is societies. In every age, every situation in my life I always attended a society, because I love to make friends in an environment where we all connect on one subject. I have been a part of Engame Academy, and there I have attended various societies, such as Philosophy, Sustainability, and I lead the debating society. In my school I am an active part of the European Parliament society, in which I have organized school events with the other members. I want to continue this habit during my university studies, therefore I do not only want to commit to the university academically, but also I am looking forward to being a part of societies such as debating, and the university’s famous model UN, Teimun society. The last aspect is societies. In every age, every situation in my life I always attended a society, because I love to make friends in an environment where we all connect on one subject. I have been a part of Engame Academy, and there I have attended various societies, such as Philosophy, Sustainability, and I lead the debating society. In my school I am an active part of the European Parliament society, in which I have organized school events with the other members. I want to continue this habit during my university studies, therefore I do not only want to commit to the university academically, but also I am looking forward to being a part of societies such as debating, and the university’s famous model UN, Teimun society. Therefore the course suits me the best because it not only fulfills my academic interest, but also my dream of studying in an international environment and also offers me opportunities to continue and start new hobbies. This makes me able to live an active university life with the most fitting course for me, which is also connected with a possible future career.
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Since
I was a child my dream to study abroad grew even stronger.
Fortunately
, I learned to integrate into an
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other
country with a
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different
culture during short-period experiences.
Firstly
, twice I spent 1 month in Framingham in the USA, living with my cousins whom we shared English as a common language. Over this experience not
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only
my English
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improved
,
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also
I experienced a completely
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different
lifestyle.

I had a similar experience, when I participated in a 1-week-long
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school
exchange program in
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Treviso
. There we visited an
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italian
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school
, I
was introduced
to the
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italian
education system, and socialized with Italian children.

I have participated in various
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international
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debating
competitions where I made several
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international
friends, and
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got
to
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meet
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people
from all around the world.

The
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University
of
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Groning
is filled
with students from all around the world, I
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want
to
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keep
on experiencing
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other
cultures by studying abroad in the atmosphere of the Netherlands.

The
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IRIO
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course
fits me in every way.
First
I
was introduced
to IR during a short
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international
relations seminar at
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Engame
Academy. Since the
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end
of the seminar, I have been waiting to broaden my knowledge about the theoretical sides of political issues.

My interest in historic politics developed during advanced history lessons, a
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part
of the
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course
is
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International
History,
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therefore
I am keen on widening my knowledge even more.

The
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course
is
strongly
related to
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International
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Organizations
. I have volunteered in
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organizations
, such as
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NextStep
, and have been
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part
of the Amnesty Youth Club which made me realize that working at an
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organization
is an appealing career path for me.
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Therefore
the
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International
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Organization
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course
is the most fitting way to educate myself on how the
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organizations
actually work.

During the
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course
, there is an ongoing language subject which I look forward to
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because
I
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want
to extend my list of languages, I have spent
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many
years perfecting my English, and Italian it is time to take up a new language.

The last aspect is
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societies
. In every age, every situation in my life I always
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attended
a
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,
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because
I
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love
to
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make
friends in an environment where we all connect on one subject. I have been a
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part
of
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Engame
Academy, and there I have
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attended
various
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societies
, such as Philosophy, Sustainability, and I lead the
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debating
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society
. In my
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school
I am an active
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part
of the European Parliament
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society
, in which I have organized
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school
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events
with the
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other
members. I
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want
to continue this habit during my
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university
studies,
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therefore
I do not
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want
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of
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debating
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university’s
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famous
model UN,
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Teimun
society.

The last aspect is
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societies
. In every age, every situation in my life I always
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attended
a
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society
,
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because
I
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love
to
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make
friends in an environment where we all connect on one subject. I have been a
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part
of
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Engame
Academy, and there I have
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attended
various
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societies
, such as Philosophy, Sustainability, and I lead the
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debating
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society
. In my
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school
I am an active
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part
of the European Parliament
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society
, in which I have organized
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school
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events
with the
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other
members. I
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want
to continue this habit during my
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university
studies,
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therefore
I do not
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model UN,
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Teimun
society.

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suits me the best
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fulfills my academic interest,
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also
my dream of studying in an
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international
environment and
also
offers me opportunities to continue and
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new hobbies. This
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live
an active
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life with the most fitting
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for me, which is
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IELTS letter motivational letter for groningen

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  American English
11 paragraphs
649 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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