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employee of the year award letter to manager

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Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to suggest a nomination for the best employee of the year award. That is Shreya, from the development team on behalf of my entire team. Firstly, considering the overall performance of the year she has done an exceptional job and have worked really hard to finish the project before the deadline. The potential to work under pressure and coming up with an accurate resolution is remarkable. In addition, she helped the junior employees to overcome the difficulties and did a smooth knowledge transfer. I believe she is deserves the reward. Also the characteristics of best employee are ensuring to follow all the company policies and rules, good learning capabilities, zeal to work as a good team player, cooperative, right use of skills and experience. I have seen all the qualities in Shreya and I hope you take my suggestion into consideration. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to suggest a nomination for the best employee of the year award.
That is
Shreya, from the development team on behalf of my entire team.

Firstly
, considering the
overall
performance of the year she has done an exceptional job and have worked
really
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hard
to finish the project
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before
the deadline. The potential to work under pressure and coming up with an accurate resolution is remarkable.

In addition
, she
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helped
the junior employees to overcome the difficulties and did a smooth knowledge transfer. I believe she is deserves the reward.

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Also
the characteristics
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of best
employee are ensuring to follow all the
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company
policies and
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rules
,
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good
learning capabilities, zeal to work as a
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good
team player, cooperative, right
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use
of
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skills
and experience.

I have
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seen
all the qualities in Shreya and I hope you take my suggestion into consideration.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter employee of the year award letter to manager

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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