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You are going to express your opinion about the magazine.. Write a letter to the manager..

You are going to express your opinion about the magazine. . Write a letter to the manager. . X7JE8

Dear Mr Brown, The purpose of this letter is to express my opinion about your magazine. I believe it is a wonderful idea to ask for the thoughts of your readers about your recently realised publication. I purchasrd the magazine because it includes topics that relate to my hobby of bird watching. I often seek out new placesto visit to take photos of birds and this magazine seems to provide lots of useful recommendation. What I liked the most about your current issue was the article describing places to go bird watching in local national parks. I especially liked the way you coverd the latest developments in the parks that support birdwatchers. Moreover, I felt attracted by the images portrayed on the cover page. I would like to suggest you to continue producing material which is informative and enjoyable to read. Also, I suggest that you make the magazine more concise and with fewer images so it is lighter and even more appealing. I hope you will find my comments and recommendations helpful. Yours sincerely.

Dear Mr Brown,

The purpose of this letter is to express my opinion about your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpamphletbookletjournalmanualdailybrochure
magazine
. I believe it is a wonderful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 the thoughts of your readers about your recently Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 publication.

I Possible spelling mistake found.purchased
purchasrd
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpamphletbookletjournalmanualdailybrochure
magazine
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it includes topics that relate to my hobby of bird watching. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 seek out new Possible spelling mistake found.places to
placesto
 visit to take photos of birds and this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpamphletbookletjournalmanualdailybrochure
magazine
 seems to provide lots of useful recommendation.

What I liked the most about your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 issue was the article describing places to go bird watching in local national parks. I especially
 liked the way you Possible spelling mistake found.covercoveredcoverscovertcove rd
coverd
 the latest developments in the parks that support birdwatchers. Moreover
, I felt attracted by the images portrayed on the cover page.

I would like to suggest you to continue producing material which is informative and enjoyable to read. Also
, I suggest that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpamphletbookletjournalmanualdailybrochure
magazine
 more concise and with fewer images This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is lighter and even more appealing.

I hope you will find my comments and recommendations helpful.

Yours sincerely
. 