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Invitation letter for birthday

Invitation letter for birthday peNE0
I am writing to tell you about a family event for my birthday on Monday 1st of February. I desire to celebrate my birthday with my folks, thus, I invite you for my happy day. You know it my acquaintance are many, thus, if you have few time you will call them. I have been organising this party for a last week. I hope that the occasion will be amazing, therefore you will spend time extremely well. However, there is a problem which are no cakes. Now, I seek how to cook desert for a party. If you know some retcept you will tell me about it. Moreover, I do not have enough dishes. If you have enough dishes you will give me. So, any issues have been yet. I am grateful for you. I strongly believe that you will come my birthday. I look forward to heard receiving your reply. Yours faithfully, Dora
I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about a family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
for my birthday on Monday 1st of February. I desire to celebrate my birthday with my folks,
thus
, I invite you for my happy day. You know it my acquaintance are
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many
,
thus
, if you have
Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: "few times".
few time
you will call them. I have been
Possible spelling mistake. 'organising' is British English.
organising
this party for a last week. I hope that the occasion will be amazing,
therefore
you will spend time
extremely
well.
However
, there is a problem which are no cakes.
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Now
, I seek how to cook desert for a party.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you know
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some
Possible spelling mistake found.
retcept
you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me about it.
Moreover
, I do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
dishes.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
dishes you will give me.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, any issues have been
yet
. I am grateful for you. I
strongly
believe that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
my birthday.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to heard receiving your reply. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Dora
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IELTS letter Invitation letter for birthday

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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