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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Evelin Volosenkova, and I am a high school student at Central Russian Gymnasium of Tallinn with a keen interest in marketing and digital marketing. I am writing to apply for the marketing management degree at Jönköping University. I have a strong feeling that I want to become an advertising manager, social media manager, or marketing manager, so I would be delighted to learn more about marketing. I am hoping that this course would help me delve into the knowledge of marketing communication, basic financial accounting, business planning, and entrepreneurship. Two years ago, I had an opportunity to spend the whole day in a public relations company. This experience helped me understand that I want to know more about marketing, public relations, and advertising. Moreover, I heard an interesting story about the beginning of the career of the founder. After this, I thought about my future in the marketing area for the first time. Further reading marketing books such as «Positioning: The Battle for Your Mind» by Al Ries and Jack Trout, and «Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion» by Robert Cialdini helped me understand the psychology of the customers, how to be creative, and create something new. These books, which include extensive and specialized knowledge, are the base of marketing, which makes them a good start for everyone interested in this field. What is more appealing to me in this area is that professionals can use numerous platforms for their work. It allows choosing a more suitable and comfortable place for gaining a bigger audience. In the modern world, it is valuable to have a choice and do not be restricted by obstacles. As a member of a teenager community, I spend a lot of time online and see a bunch of advertising. In the future, I would like to delve into social media marketing or influencer marketing to move with time as a resident of the modern urban world. Nowadays, businesses use social media in a myriad of different ways. I think that Instagram and Facebook are the best platforms for working, which can help gain customers and appreciation, increase sales, and drive website traffic. My point of view is based on the opinion of great marketers, such as Mike Hayes and Jessica Lauria. Mike Hayes is the digital marketing manager of Ben & Jerry's, and Jessica is the director of brand communications at Chobani. They both think that Instagram is the future of commerce. As a broad-minded and intelligent person, I have participated in several extracurricular activities, including the school chemistry club, poetry contests, and IT competitions. From a young age, I was passionate about language learning, and this desire made me go to language courses. Mostly due to these courses, now I have superior knowledge of English and the Estonian language. Also, I have filmed several short videos for my school projects. The videos aimed to encourage young people to vote in EU elections, to advertise living in Estonia and summon people to live in their home country, and to tell more about the Estonian language and its culture. Undoubtedly, this experience helped me develop my skills and help me build relationships with different people. The most helpful school project was a short video, which aimed to advertise living in Estonia. The video helped me develop my organizational, language, and strategy skills. The hardest part was to organize filming, to choose the best places and products in my small country to advertise, and to find breathtaking views for the background. Also, there is another video, which aimed to encourage people to live in their home country. The video helped me develop translational, communication, and thinking skills. Such experience expands my abilities and evolves my personality. I have a strong feeling that my diverse interests would make me the best fit for Jönköping university. Even though I participated in events that had a connection to encouraging people to live in their home country, I would prefer to leave Estonia. From a young age, my parents tell me about opportunities abroad. The opinion of my parents had a significant impact on my decisions in the future. Even though Estonia is my home country, my desire to open a whole new world outweighs the options that were given me for granted. Moreover, I think that Sweden is a more developed country that can make my dreams come true. Jönköping University is the place, which can open a path to a successful and bright future. I appreciate that the university encourages students to achieve their potential. Studying at Jönköping University would help me develop my aptitude for marketing and management. I am open to any kind of life experiences that Jönköping University would bring me. I am hoping to achieve as many goals as I could through a marketing management o degree. Yours faithfully, Evelin Volosenkova
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
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Evelin
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Volosenkova
, and I am a high
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school
student at Central Russian Gymnasium of Tallinn with a keen interest in
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marketing
and digital
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marketing
. I am writing to apply for the
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marketing
management degree at
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Jönköping
University.

I have a strong feeling that I want to become an advertising
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manager
, social media
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manager
, or
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marketing
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manager
,
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so
I would
be delighted
to learn more about
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marketing
.
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I
am hoping that this course would
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help
me delve into the knowledge of
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marketing
communication, basic financial accounting, business planning, and entrepreneurship.

Two years ago, I had an opportunity to spend the whole day in a public relations
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company
. This
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experience
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helped
me understand that I want to know more about
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marketing
, public relations, and advertising.
Moreover
, I heard an interesting story about the beginning of the career of the founder. After this, I
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thought
about my
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future
in the
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marketing
area for the
first
time.
Further
reading
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marketing
books such as «Positioning: The Battle for Your Mind» by Al
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Ries
and Jack Trout, and «Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion» by Robert
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Cialdini
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helped
me understand the psychology of the customers, how to be creative, and create something new. These books, which include extensive and specialized knowledge, are the base of
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marketing
, which
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makes
them a
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good
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start
for everyone interested in this field.

What is more
appealing to me in this area is that professionals can
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use
numerous platforms for their work. It
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allows
choosing a more suitable and comfortable place for gaining a bigger audience. In the modern world, it is valuable to have a choice and do not
be restricted
by obstacles.

As a member of a
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teenager
community, I spend
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a lot of
time online and
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see
a bunch of advertising. In the
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future
, I would like to delve into social media
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marketing
or influencer
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marketing
to
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move
with time as a resident of the modern urban world. Nowadays, businesses
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use
social media in a myriad of
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different
ways. I
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think
that Instagram and Facebook are the best platforms for working, which can
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help
gain customers and appreciation, increase sales, and drive website traffic. My point of view
is based
on the opinion of great marketers, such as Mike Hayes and Jessica
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Lauria
. Mike Hayes is the digital
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marketing
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manager
of Ben & Jerry's, and Jessica is the director of brand communications at
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Chobani
. They both
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think
that Instagram is the
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future
of commerce.

As a broad-minded and intelligent person, I have participated in several extracurricular activities, including the
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school
chemistry club, poetry contests, and IT competitions. From a young age, I was passionate about
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language
learning, and this desire made me go to
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language
courses.
Mostly
due to these courses,
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now
I have superior knowledge of English and the Estonian
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language
.
Also
, I have filmed several short
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videos
for my
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school
projects. The
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videos
aimed to encourage young
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people
to vote in EU elections, to advertise living in Estonia and summon
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people
to
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live
in their home
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country
, and to
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tell
more about the Estonian
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language
and its culture.
Undoubtedly
, this
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experience
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helped
me
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develop
my
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skills
and
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help
me build relationships with
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different
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people
.

The most helpful
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school
project was a short
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video
, which aimed to advertise living in Estonia. The
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video
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helped
me
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develop
my organizational,
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language
, and strategy
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skills
.
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The
hardest part was to organize filming, to choose the best places and products in my
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small
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country
to advertise, and to find breathtaking views for the background.
Also
, there is another
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video
, which aimed to encourage
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people
to
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live
in their home
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country
. The
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video
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helped
me
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develop
translational, communication, and thinking
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skills
. Such
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experience
expands my abilities and evolves my personality. I have a strong feeling that my diverse interests would
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make
me the best fit for
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Jönköping
university.

Even though
I participated in
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events
that had a connection to encouraging
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people
to
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live
in their home
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country
, I would prefer to
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leave
Estonia. From a young age, my parents
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tell
me about opportunities abroad. The opinion of my parents had a significant impact on my decisions in the
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future
.
Even though
Estonia is my home
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country
, my desire to open a whole new world outweighs the options that were
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given
me for granted.
Moreover
, I
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think
that Sweden is a more developed
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country
that can
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make
my dreams
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come
true.
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Jönköping
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University
is the place, which can open a path to a successful and bright
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future
. I appreciate that the
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university
encourages students to achieve their potential. Studying at
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Jönköping
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University
would
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help
me
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develop
my aptitude for
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marketing
and management. I am open to any kind of life
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experiences
that
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Jönköping
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University
would bring me. I am hoping to achieve as
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many
goals as I could through a
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marketing
management o degree.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Evelin
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Volosenkova
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IELTS letter motivation letter for university

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11 paragraphs
810 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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