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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1 xY66
Dear friend, Hope you are doing well. I am so excited yo writing this letter after such a long time. I have an job opportunity which is the reason i am writing this to you. I hAve received the letter you have sent to me on 24th feb 2021 for a job. I believe your degree has been completed and you are looking for feild job. I heard about xyz company is looking for employers who can join immediately. Hence, i have attached thr details of the company with this letter, You apply for it as soon as possible and revert me if you need any kind of support. All the best. Your sincerely, Divya
Dear friend,

Hope you are doing well. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
excited
Did you mean "to", "you" or "your"?
yo
writing this letter after such a long time. I have
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
job opportunity which is the reason
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am writing this to you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake found.
hAve
received the letter you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to me on 24th
Possible spelling mistake found.
feb
2021 for a job.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
believe your degree has
been completed
and you are looking for
Possible spelling mistake found.
feild
job.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
heard about
Possible spelling mistake found.
xyz
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is looking for employers who can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
immediately.
Hence
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have attached
Possible spelling mistake found.
thr
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
with this letter,

You apply for it as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible and revert me if you need any kind of support.

All the best.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Divya

IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
114 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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