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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1 xY66

Dear friend, Hope you are doing well. I am so excited yo writing this letter after such a long time. I have an job opportunity which is the reason i am writing this to you. I hAve received the letter you have sent to me on 24th feb 2021 for a job. I believe your degree has been completed and you are looking for feild job. I heard about xyz company is looking for employers who can join immediately. Hence, i have attached thr details of the company with this letter, You apply for it as soon as possible and revert me if you need any kind of support. All the best. Your sincerely, Divya

Dear friend,

Hope you are doing well. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited Did you mean "to", "you" or "your"?toyouyour
yo
 writing this letter after such a long time. I have Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 job opportunity which is the reason Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am writing this to you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake found.havegavesavewavecaveDave
hAve
 received the letter you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to me on 24th Possible spelling mistake found.FebFEBfewwebfedfee
feb
 2021 for a job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 believe your degree has been completed
 and you are looking for Possible spelling mistake found.fieldfallbaldfadWaldFahd
feild
 job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 heard about Possible spelling mistake found.XYZAYZCYZXYLYYZ
xyz
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is looking for employers who can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 immediately. Hence
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have attached Possible spelling mistake found.thethoThortarthyTHC
thr
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with this letter,

You apply for it as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and revert me if you need any kind of support.

All the best. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphDivya.Divya!Divya?Divya:Divya,Divya;
Divya