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motivation letter for study permit

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am applying for a study permit at Fengshaw College for the Full-time Graduate Certificate Program in Mobile Application Development, which begins September 6, 2022, and ends December 31, 2023. It was decided to continue studying abroad since there are no programs similar to the one chosen in the higher educational institutions of our country. The choice fell on Canada for several reasons. The first of them is that Canadian education is an international education and diplomas are quoted all over the world. Also among the English-speaking countries, Canadian education has a relatively low cost. Moreover, one of the advantages of studying in Canada is the English-speaking language environment. In the field of IT, the demand for specialists with knowledge of the English language is growing every year.
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am applying for a study permit at
Fengshaw
College for the Full-time Graduate Certificate Program in Mobile Application Development, which
begins
September 6, 2022, and ends December 31, 2023.

It
was decided
to continue studying abroad since there are no programs similar to the one chosen in the higher educational institutions of our country.

The choice fell on Canada for several reasons. The
first
of them is that Canadian education is an international education and diplomas
are quoted
all over the world.
Also
among the English-speaking countries, Canadian education has a
relatively
low cost.

Moreover
, one of the advantages of studying in Canada is the English-speaking language environment. In the field of IT, the demand for specialists with knowledge of the English language is growing every year.
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IELTS letter motivation letter for study permit

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  American English
5 paragraphs
132 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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