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write letter to the editor of the magazine about incorrect information

write letter to the editor of the magazine about incorrect information kj31n

Dear Mr SmiteMy name is Solmaz. I’m a teacher and have been working in high school since 2012. yesterday I had read an article in an international travel magazine. I think it was your magazine that was written some incorrect information about my town. I decided to write a letter for you give you some advice so correct information us town. Because it is not good for your magazine. My city is very ancient as well as has long history. In fact one of the most important city in my country. Finally; I suggest for your magazine that your colleague must quite study before published every information about everywhere. They must sure. with regardsSolmaz

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