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Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about , what the error is , what you expect the editor to do

Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about, what the error is, what you expect the editor to do 8JwEP
Dear sir/madam, I like reading the weekly articles column in your newspaper. I admire the way you narrate the journey of the people and their contribution to society one way or another. They are very inspiring and you really do a great job. Last week when I was reading an article in your evening edition about the life of such a person published on 6 January 2022. I unexpectedly discovered some fatal error. In fact, the person you wrote is one of my close friends and the event you described was systemized by me. I knew this for fact that she was never "relieved of her duty to chronic illness". This is a piece of incorrect information. She had preferably decided to quit her job following her passion to serve the needy. Another major blunder I noticed in the latter part of the paper was the description of the purpose of the meet. The firm organized a gathering not to "raise the funds" but " with a vision to acknowledge the people about the life homeless and to encourage them to volunteer. " Hoping these were just clinkers not intentional. I expect you to correct these blunders and then publish the correction with an apology. Please make sure such mistakes don't repeat in the future. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. With Regards
Dear sir/madam, I like reading the weekly articles column in your newspaper. I admire the way you narrate the journey of the
people
and their contribution to society one way or another. They are
very
inspiring and you
really
do a great job.

Last week when I was reading an article in your evening edition about the life of such a person published on 6 January 2022. I
unexpectedly
discovered
some
fatal error.

In fact, the person you wrote is one of my close friends and the
event
you
described
was systemized
by me. I knew this for fact that she was never
"
relieved of her duty to chronic illness
"
. This is a piece of incorrect information. She had
preferably
decided to quit her job following her passion to serve the needy.

Another major blunder I noticed in the latter part of the paper was the description of the purpose of the
meet
. The firm organized a gathering not to
"
raise the funds
"
but
"
with a vision to acknowledge the
people
about the life homeless and to encourage them to volunteer.
"


Hoping these were
just
clinkers not intentional. I
expect
you to correct these blunders and then publish the correction with an apology.
Please
make
sure such mistakes don't repeat in the future.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply
soon
.

With Regards
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about, what the error is, what you expect the editor to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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