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Hello teacher and everyone, welcome to my presentation. Let me introduce myself. My name is Tham. Today I am here to talk to you about China-the country I want to visit one day. China is the third largest country in the world after Russia and Canada. And it bored to the north of Vietnam. This is the most populous country in the world, with a population of over 1 billion people. The terrain is relatively diverse with deserts, plateaus, mountains, and fertile plains enriched by silt of the big rivers. China is being known one of the cradles of human culture, that the culture preserved over thousands of years of history. The country of China is not only famous for its area or population but also famous for beautiful and famous places in the world such as: Great Wall, Forbidden City. Moreover, the country has a strong economy and has achieved many remarkable achievements. China belongs to the monsoon, diverse climate, tropical in the south to close temperate in the north. The national average temperature from -4. 70C to 260C. The people here are friendly and sociable. They are ready to help any time. The above is what I know and learn over the internet. And I hope I will have money to visit China with my friend- Linh in the future! Thank you all for listening
Hello teacher and everyone, welcome to my presentation.
Let
me introduce myself. My name is
Tham
.
Today
I am here to talk to you about China-the
country
I want to visit one day. China is the third largest
country
in the world after Russia and Canada. And it bored to the north of Vietnam. This is the most populous
country
in the world, with a population of over 1 billion
people
. The terrain is
relatively
diverse with deserts, plateaus, mountains, and fertile plains enriched by silt of the
big
rivers. China is
being known
one of the cradles of human culture, that the culture preserved over thousands of years of history. The
country
of China is not
only
famous
for its area or population
but
also
famous
for
beautiful
and
famous
places in the world such as: Great Wall, Forbidden City.
Moreover
, the
country
has a strong economy and has achieved
many
remarkable achievements. China belongs to the monsoon, diverse climate, tropical in the south to close temperate in the north. The national average temperature from -4. 70C to 260C. The
people
here are friendly and sociable. They are ready to
help
any time. The above is what I know and learn over the internet. And I hope I will have money to visit China with my friend-
Linh
in the future! Thank you all for
listening
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IELTS letter write about country you will visit one day

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
226 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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