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Letter of motivation for Hungarian scholarship

Letter of motivation for Hungarian scholarship PX6YB
With this letter, I would like to express my keen interest in applying for the bachelor’s degree program in Finance at the Hungarian University. I am a very active and self-organized student. I am grateful that I have found out the opportunity to study in Hungary. Since I was a student, I've always had a love for math. Math is the one subject I am good at, and I find it easy and enjoyable to do. Therefore, I would participate in many Olympiads. Besides, as my parents were and grandpa were accounts, particularly my grandpa was a honored economist in Mongolia, I was introduced at their work and observed the life of an account. While graduated my high school, I decided to study as finance based on my interest and my environments related to finance. When I was a teenager, I was responsible for my household expenditures which was the first independent experience in my life. Besides, they used to give me a small allowance every week. After they gave me, I spent them wisely. Still now, I have really thanked my parents because they motivated me to be involved in finance. I think finance helps students understand the difference between value and price and its role and impact in the business decisions we take in our day to day lives. Sometimes, I really amazed that why children are wasting money on nothing without right methods. I really want to help them to use their money well by giving them basic knowledge about the finance. After I study well, I will make useful trainings of private finance for the students who study in middle schools and high schools. Additionally, another reason why I have chosen this major is a little practical workplace. As I helped my parents for their easy calculations, I understood more about my desired future major. At the time, the finance field seemed very interesting to me. My parents say that in my country, the largest companies tend to give priority to students with a financial background because they can take better business decisions and are great problem solvers and students with a financial background also have a better understanding of the company balance sheets and can help in communicating the management decisions to another organizational member. In today’s world and economy, everybody depends on financial strategies and principles. From small start-ups to large corporations, from corner shops to international supermarket chains, from law firms to insurance companies — they all need Finance. After graduation my bachelor’s degree in Finance, I want to establish my own company which I will invest in the development of country. Furthermore, I am sure I will be a highly skilled specialist of finance in the future. Hungary is becoming an increasingly popular host country for international students. Hungary is a modern and safe country, and the cost of living are among the lowest in Europe. I am sure I will learn invaluable knowledge and learn many efficient experiences from international students in foreign environment while I study. I will be grateful if I can become an awardee of Stipendium Hungary because it is a big help for me to achieve my goal in the future. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Emujin Enkhbold,
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Finance
at the Hungarian University. I am a
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very
active and self-organized
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student
. I am grateful that I have found out the opportunity to
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study
in Hungary.

Since I was a
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student
, I've always had a
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love
for math. Math is the one subject I am
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good
at, and I find it easy and enjoyable to do.
Therefore
, I would participate in
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many
Olympiads.
Besides
, as my
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parents
were and grandpa were accounts,
particularly
my grandpa was
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a
honored economist in Mongolia, I
was introduced
at their work and observed the life of an account. While
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graduated
my high school, I decided to
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study
as
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finance
based on my interest and my environments related to
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finance
. When I was a
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teenager
, I was responsible for my household expenditures which was the
first
independent experience in my life.
Besides
, they
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used
to give me a
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small
allowance every week. After they gave me, I spent them
wisely
.
Still
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now
, I have
really
thanked my
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parents
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because
they motivated me to
be involved
in
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finance
. I
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think
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finance
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helps
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students
understand the difference between value and price and its role and impact in the business decisions we take in our
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day to day
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lives
.
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Sometimes
, I
really
amazed that why children are wasting money on nothing without right methods. I
really
want to
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help
them to
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use
their money well by giving them basic knowledge about the
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finance
. After I
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study
well, I will
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make
useful trainings of private
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finance
for the
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students
who
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study
in middle schools and high schools.
Additionally
, another reason why I have chosen this major is a
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little
practical workplace. As I
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helped
my
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parents
for their easy calculations, I understood more about my desired future major. At the time, the
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finance
field seemed
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very
interesting to me. My
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parents
say that in my
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country
, the largest
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companies
tend to give priority to
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students
with a financial background
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because
they can take better business decisions and are great problem solvers and
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students
with a financial background
also
have a better understanding of the
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company
balance sheets and can
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help
in communicating the management decisions to another organizational member. In
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today
’s world and economy, everybody depends on financial strategies and principles. From
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small
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start
-ups to large corporations, from corner shops to international supermarket chains, from law firms to insurance
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companies
— they all need
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Finance
. After graduation my bachelor’s degree in
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Finance
, I want to establish my
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own
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company
which I will invest in the development of
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country
.
Furthermore
, I am sure I will be a
highly
skilled specialist of
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finance
in the future.

Hungary is becoming an
increasingly
popular host
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country
for international
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students
. Hungary is a modern and safe
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country
, and the cost of living are among the lowest in Europe. I am sure I will learn invaluable knowledge and learn
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many
efficient experiences from international
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students
in foreign environment while I
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study
. I will be grateful if I can become an awardee of
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Stipendium
Hungary
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because
it is a
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big
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help
for me to achieve my goal in the future.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely
yours,

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Emujin
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IELTS letter Letter of motivation for Hungarian scholarship

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6.0
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