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Hello buddy! you would be pleased to know that I am getting married and I am writing this letter to you to invite on this occasion.

Hello buddy! you would be pleased to know that I am getting married and I am writing this letter to you to invite on this occasion. pRKod
Dear Alan, Hello buddy! you would be pleased to know that I am getting married and I am writing this letter to you to invite on this occasion. Talking about my partner, she is one of my colleagues in the office and we have been working together in the same team for 3 years. She is very smart and lively and I love her company. After a relationship for all these years, we finally have decided to tie a knot. The wedding is scheduled to be taken place next month on the 14th of March at my home town New Delhi. I want to let you know well in time so that you can take a leave and book a flight to India from the UK. I will take care of your staying arrangement here, don't worry about this. As she is also Indian, we both have agreed to get married in Indian traditions and customs. It would be a good chance for you to enjoy the Indian marriage. Apart from this, you will love to see various rituals and functions performed prior to the wedding day. Hope to see you soon. With love Lovish
Dear Alan,

Hello buddy!
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you
would be
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pleased
to know that I am getting
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married and
I am writing this letter to you to invite on this occasion.

Talking about my partner, she is one of my colleagues in the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
office and
we have been working together in the same team for 3 years. She is
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very
smart and lively and I
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love
her
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company
. After a relationship for all these years, we
finally
have decided to tie a knot.

The wedding
is scheduled
to
be taken
place
next
month on the 14th of March at my home town New Delhi. I want to
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let
you know well in time
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so
that you can take a
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leave
and book a flight to India from the UK. I will take care of your staying arrangement here, don't worry about this.

As she is
also
Indian, we both have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
married in Indian traditions and customs. It would be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
chance for you to enjoy the Indian marriage. Apart from this, you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
various rituals and functions performed prior to the wedding day.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

With
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love


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IELTS letter Hello buddy! you would be pleased to know that I am getting married and I am writing this letter to you to invite on this occasion.

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194 words
6.0
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