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Meeting Request - Mohammad AL-Bahrani

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Dear Mr. Salahuddin Tulbah, Greetings, I hope this email finds you well and in good health. This is Mohammad J. AL-Bahrani and I am a contractor employee reporting directly to you as per the current BIOD organization. I have been reporting under SA OPD/PMT umbrella since May 2015 at Dammam STAR Fab. Yard, however unfortunately the end of 2019 I was assigned to support SA PID in a comparatively lower and least opportune position for one’s career path and growth. Given the brief introduction above, I kindly would like to request an appointment, anytime at your convenience; to meet you in person and further introduce myself and take your professional read on my situation, as I am at such a low point of my career where I could use a professional and productive discussion with someone who can make an actual and a positive change. Appreciating having taken the time to go through my email and looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Respectfully Yours,
Dear Mr.
Salahuddin
Tulbah
,

Greetings, I hope this email finds you well and in
good
health.

This is Mohammad J.
AL-Bahrani and
I am a contractor employee reporting
directly
to you as per the
current
BIOD
organization. I have been reporting under SA
OPD
/PMT umbrella since May 2015 at
Dammam
STAR Fab. Yard,
however
unfortunately the
end
of 2019 I
was assigned
to support SA PID in a
comparatively
lower and least opportune position for one’s career path and growth.

Given
the brief introduction above, I kindly would like to request an appointment, anytime at your convenience; to
meet
you in person and
further
introduce myself and take your professional read on my situation, as I am at such a low point of my career where I could
use
a professional and productive discussion with someone who can
make
an actual and a
positive
change
.

Appreciating having taken the time to go through my email and looking forward to hearing back from you
soon
.

Respectfully
Yours,
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IELTS letter Meeting Request - Mohammad AL-Bahrani

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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