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Your friend on the Internet invited you to stay at his place in Paris.

Your friend on the Internet invited you to stay at his place in Paris. 3mRd

Dear Alice! Thanks for your letter. I was excited to get it from you! My family and I are great! There are many different events I'd like to tell you about, but I'll better tell you when I'll come to you. Thank you so much for your invitation, I'll be very glad to come and see you. You know I love so much your place. I can't tell you now when I'll visit you exactly, I need some time to think about it. But I'm going to visit you in the summertime when the weather will be the best. I'm going to talk about holiday with my boss and then I'll buy tickets. I think, I'll go by plane, because going by train is too long. When I'll by the tickets I'll tell you the time I'm arriving. I hope the weather will be great, because I want to spend some days on the beach swim and sunbathe together. I'm looking forward to meeting with you! I'd like to know how are you and when is the best time to visit you.

Dear Alice! Thanks for your letter. I was excited
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it from you! My family and I are great! There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
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tell
 you about, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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tell
 you when I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to you. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for your invitation, I'll be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you. You know I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much your place. I can't You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscloserevealinstructconfessmentionexplain
tell
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 when I'll visit you exactly, I need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I'm going to visit you in the Consider using "summer".summer
summertime
 when the weather will be the best. I'm going to talk about holiday with my boss and then I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 tickets. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, I'll go by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 going by train is too long. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I'll Did you maybe mean "buy" or "be"?buybe
by
 the tickets I'll You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscloserevealinstructconfessmentionexplain
tell
 you the time I'm arriving. I hope the weather will be great, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 days on the beach swim and sunbathe together. I'm looking forward to meeting with you! Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'd like to know how are you and when is the best time to visit you. 