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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview W260
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regard to a vacant position of a waiter in your esteemed restaurant. Recently you might have heard the news with respect to shutting down of Barista cafe because of financial crises. All the outlets across the country were closed. I was one of the employees working for the venture. Currently, I am jobless and actively looking for a job. I have been working in this field from past 3 years and skilled to perform all the duties. As a waiter, you need to have good communication, good listening ability and should respect customers. In my last job, I have successfully demonstrated all those skills and was a star performer. Attaching the feedback from the customers whom I have served in the past. Please, If you can consider my request and suggest a day and time to have face-to-face discussion rounds would be really helpful. I am happy to have the discussion at any given day except Sundays as I have to take my mother to hospital for her regular check-ups. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regard to a vacant position of a waiter in your esteemed restaurant. Recently you might have heard the news with respect to shutting down of Barista
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because
of financial crises. All the outlets across the country
were closed
. I was one of the employees working for the venture.
Currently
, I am jobless and
actively
looking for a job.

I have been working in this field from past 3 years and skilled to perform all the duties. As a waiter, you need to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
communication,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
listening ability and should respect customers. In my last job, I have
successfully
demonstrated all those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and was a star performer. Attaching the feedback from the customers whom I have served in the past.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, If you can consider my request and suggest a day and time to have face-to-face discussion rounds would be
really
helpful. I am happy to have the discussion at any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
day except Sundays as I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take my mother to hospital for her regular
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-ups.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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