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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Grandmother,

You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Grandmother, P05B
Dear Grandmother, How are you? I'm doing great. I am really sorry that I couldn't come home to visit our family last week. I understand how much you would have expected for my arrival, but i have disappointed you. I really apologize for making you feel worried for not getting in touch with you recently and, also for not informing you over the phone. As I have already told you earlier, that my exams were going to start next month, I had some assignments to be completed which carried internal marks and, suddenly they have rescheduled the last submission date also. Because of which, I was busy and had to cancel the plan to visit home. However, to compensate for the missed visit and to make you more happy, I have decided to apply for leave next week, to stay at our house with you. I also wanted you to confirm if you have any other plans so that i can postpone or rearrange the visit some other time. I also decided to take you out for a short trip to Rameshwaram which you had been asking me for a longer time. Waiting to hear back from you soon. Take care. Best Wishes, Renuka
Dear Grandmother,

How are you? I'm doing great.

I am
really
sorry that I couldn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
home to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
our family last week.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
understand how much you would have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
for my arrival,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have disappointed you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
really
apologize for making you feel
The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean "worried about"?
worried for
not getting in touch with you recently and,
also
for not informing you over the phone.

As I have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
you earlier, that my exams were going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
next
month, I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
assignments to
be completed
which carried internal marks and,
suddenly
they have rescheduled the last submission date
also
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of which, I was busy and had to cancel the plan to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
home.

However
, to compensate for the missed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you more happy, I have decided to apply for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
next
week, to stay at our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
with you. I
also
wanted you to confirm if you have any other plans
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can postpone or rearrange the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other time. I
also
decided to take you out for a short trip to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rameshwaram
which you had been asking me for a longer time.

Waiting to hear back from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Take care.

Best Wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Renuka

IELTS letter You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Grandmother,

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  American English
8 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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