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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: ●explain what you like about the cafeteria ●say what is wrong ●suggest how it could be improved

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: ●explain what you like about the cafeteria ●say what is wrong ●suggest how it could be improved 9p9w

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my views on the college cafeteria. It has all the facilities that students can have at college including the friendly staff, hygienic food along with proper space to eat. Usually, we all students prefer to have the chef speciality- Chinese food. However, I would like to bring to your notice that besides all the great things, the cafeteria needs some improvements. Some of them are the cleanliness of utensils and the tables. We have observed several times that the leftovers are not properly cleaned and thus needs immediate attention. Few suggestions I can suggest for the same like the hiring of more junior staff to clean the things as well as providing them with the proper training focusing on the importance of hygiene. I hope you will take the necessary action as soon as possible. Your sincerely, Gunjan

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my views on the college cafeteria. It has all the facilities that students can have at college including the friendly staff, hygienic food along with proper space to eat. Usually
, we all students prefer to have the chef Possible spelling mistake. 'speciality' is British English.specialty
speciality
- Chinese food.

However
, I would like to bring to your notice that besides
 all the great things, the cafeteria needs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 improvements. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of them are the cleanliness of utensils and the tables. We have observed several times that the leftovers are not properly
 cleaned and thus
 needs immediate attention.

Few suggestions I can suggest for the same Comparison is written 'the same ... "as"'.as
like
 the hiring of more junior staff to clean the things as well
 as providing them with the proper training focusing on the importance of hygiene.

I hope you will take the necessary action as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.Gunman
Gunjan

IELTS letter You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: ●explain what you like about the cafeteria ●say what is wrong ●suggest how it could be improved

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

148 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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