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Complain about document requirement

Complain about document requirement DwNak
Dear Sir/Madam Thank you for your email. Given the limited time available before my exam on 28th October, I will need to find service providers that can fulfill your updated requirements. Please be so kind as to define “a reliable document proof of negative antigen test/RT-PCR”. Obviously, I cannot arrange a vaccination within such a short notice, and I am not willing to gamble the quality of the vaccines that are available in Myanmar with my Health. As a matter of fact, British Council is the one amending the requirements which has been agreed previously. If you can provide the safety measures with your arrangement, I am willing to consider it because I have an important exam to attend to in next 6 days or less depending on the time you reply this enquiry. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks and regards
Dear Sir/Madam

Thank you for your email.
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Given
the limited time available
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before
my exam on 28th October, I will need to find service providers that can fulfill your updated requirements.

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Please
be
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so
kind as to define “a reliable document proof of
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negative
antigen
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test
/RT-PCR”.

Obviously
, I cannot arrange a vaccination within such a short notice, and I am not willing to gamble the quality of the vaccines that are available in Myanmar with my Health.

As a matter of fact, British Council is the one amending the requirements which has been
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agreed
previously. If you can provide the safety measures with your arrangement, I am willing to consider it
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because
I have an
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important
exam to attend to in
next
6 days or less depending on the time you reply this
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enquiry
.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Thanks and regards
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IELTS letter Complain about document requirement

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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