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You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news wdQr
Dear Daniel, Hope you are and your family are in the best of your health. I am sorry for not keeping in touch frequently, but you were always in my thoughts. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have recently joined a new travel agency as a manager. As ou knew, I was working with a small company earlier and so much wanted to change the job. The previous company had long working hours and that was taking a toll on my health. Besides, the remuneration that I received there was also on the lower side. Fortunately, when I was hunting for the job, I came across this new travel agency and applied for it. By god's grace, I made it through the interview. This company has a good work culture and I am not made to sit for long after the work hours are over. On top of that, I am being paid much better than the previous job. In addition to starting with a new job, I have also enrolled myself in a course for Mass Communication from the prestigious Oxford University. As I always wanted to become an orator, this was the best opportunity for me to get certified from the best educational institute of the world. Give my warm wishes to Mayra and Julie, and visit my place in next month. We will all have a good time together. Looking to hearing from you soon. Yours SincerelyHarsh Ashwin Shah
Dear Daniel,

Hope you are and your family are in the best of your health. I am sorry for not keeping in touch
frequently
,
but
you were always in my thoughts. I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I have recently
joined
a new travel agency as a manager.

As
ou
knew, I was working with a
small
company
earlier and
so
much wanted to
change
the job. The previous
company
had long working hours and that was taking a toll on my health.
Besides
, the remuneration that I received there was
also
on the lower side.
Fortunately
, when I was hunting for the job, I came across this new travel agency and applied for it. By god's grace, I made it through the interview. This
company
has a
good
work
culture and
I am not made to sit for long after the work hours are over.
On top of that
, I am
being paid
much better than the previous job.

In addition
to starting with a new job, I have
also
enrolled myself in a course for Mass Communication from the prestigious Oxford University. As I always wanted to become an orator, this was the best opportunity for me to
get
certified from the best educational institute of the world.

Give my warm wishes to Mayra and Julie, and visit my place in
next
month. We will all have a
good
time together.

Looking to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
SincerelyHarsh
Ashwin
Shah
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IELTS letter You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
246 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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