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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination GaKe
Dear Jon, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and good spirit, The purpose of letter is to solve your query regarding holiday Destination. My top most recommendation would be Bali because, It has immensely famous Beaches with lot of activities to do. Moreover having a vibrant culture namely Hinduism as well as Ancient art, Your holidays can be a lifetime experience! Let me explain my trip. We booked hotel "Tanah lot", Prime tourist spot Kuta beach was a short walk from the hotel, In addition rooms were well maintained, spot on clean. Other than that free WI-FI, Breakfast was complementary. All in all a true value for money. Bali is a beach full of different activities on the one hand if you want to explore culture go visit Ulluwattu temple or In the party mood have good time at Hilton bar, Everything is walking distance which make it extremely special. Although Bali called a paradise but faced one Unpleasant thing namely poor communication skills most of the people at local shops are Balinese hence very bad in English that cause difficulty in shopping sometimes. I Wish you Wonder full time there. Please do share your Experience with me on returning back. Yours lovingly
Dear Jon, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and
good
spirit, The purpose of letter is to solve your query regarding holiday Destination.

My top most recommendation would be Bali
because
, It has
immensely
famous
Beaches with
lot of
activities to do.
Moreover
having a vibrant culture
namely
Hinduism
as well
as Ancient art, Your holidays can be a lifetime experience!

Let
me
explain
my trip. We booked hotel
"
Tanah
lot
"
, Prime tourist spot
Kuta
beach was a short walk from the hotel,
In addition
rooms were well maintained, spot on clean. Other than that free WI-FI, Breakfast was complementary. All in all a true value for money.

Bali is a beach full of
different
activities on the one hand if you want to explore culture go visit
Ulluwattu
temple or In the party mood have
good
time at Hilton bar, Everything is walking distance which
make
it
extremely
special.

Although Bali called a paradise
but
faced one Unpleasant thing
namely
poor communication
skills
most of the
people
at local shops are Balinese
hence
very
bad
in English that cause difficulty in shopping
sometimes
. I Wish you Wonder full time there.
Please
do share your Experience with me on
returning back
.

Yours
lovingly
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination

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  American English
6 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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