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Letter to your sibling about your life

Letter to your sibling about your life Dorjk
Dear Ricky, Hope this letter finds you well. It’s been so long that we haven’t met. Thank you for the smart watch you sent on my birthday. It is such a wonderful and thoughtful gift. Remember the hill station I talked about in my last letter where I always wanted to go. I was finally able to visit that hill station on my birthday with my husband and son. It was a great getaway from my busy schedule for 2 days. How was your trip to Bora Bora Inland where you went last month with your wife? I would love to see some pictures of your holiday. I hope that you have plans to come to my place this Christmas as I’m really looking forward to meeting you and spend good time together like old days. Mom and Dad will also be coming, so it will be great fun where the entire family will be together after so long. Do let me know your travel dates and plans in advance. See you soon. Warm Regards, Sam
Dear Ricky,

Hope this letter finds you well. It’s been
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so
long that we haven’t met. Thank you for the smart
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watch
you
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sent
on my birthday. It is such a wonderful and thoughtful gift.

Remember the hill station I talked about in my last letter where I always wanted to go. I was
finally
able to visit that hill station on my birthday with my husband and son. It was a great getaway from my busy schedule for 2 days.

How was your trip to
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Bora
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Bora
Inland where you went last month with your wife? I would
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love
to
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see
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some
pictures of your holiday.

I hope that you have plans to
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come
to my place this Christmas as I’m
really
looking forward to meeting you and spend
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good
time together like
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old
days. Mom and Dad will
also
be coming,
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so
it will be great fun where the entire family will be together after
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so
long.

Do
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let
me know your travel dates and plans in advance.

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See
you
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soon
.

Warm Regards,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter to your sibling about your life

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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