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Letter to the Tourist office to get information for a town

Letter to the Tourist office to get information for a town VwJG7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to gain information on the Agra city as I will be visiting there with my family next month for 4 days for a holiday. We have booked Ramada Hotel for the stay from 01st to 4th November. I would like to have the list of tourist places to visit in the town and seek some suggestions on which are the best ones to visit with husband and 2 children. I would also request you to provide information on the special events happening there during my stay such as plays or any recreational activities. I have heard that the show called Maria-The-Opal which is based on history and love story of King Thomas and Queen Maria is popular and entertaining. I would request you to let me know the timings and ticket prices for me to book in advance. Family visits are always wonderful, and I want to make sure this one is also great; hence I would look forward to a prompt response for me to do the required booking well in time. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to gain information on the Agra city as I will be visiting there with my family
next
month for 4 days for a holiday.

We have booked Ramada Hotel for the stay from 01st to 4th November. I would like to have the list of tourist places to visit in the town and seek
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
suggestions on which are the best ones to visit with husband and 2 children.

I would
also
request you to provide information on the special
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
happening there during my stay such as plays or any recreational activities.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have heard that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
called Maria-The-Opal which
is based
on history and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
story of King Thomas and Queen Maria is popular and entertaining.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know the timings and ticket prices for me to book in advance.

Family visits are always wonderful, and I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure this one is
also
great;
hence
I would look forward to a prompt response for me to do the required booking well in time.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter to the Tourist office to get information for a town

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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