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Letter to the librarian for not returning books

Letter to the librarian for not returning books rG3V6
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library last month. I understand that as per the policy, I cannot keep the books for more than 10 days and it is being 2 weeks. The reason I was not able to return them as I had met with an accident and fractured by left leg. I was admitted to the hospital and was under heavy medication and completed missed the deadline or asking someone to return the material on my behalf. I sincerely apologised for the inconvenience it would have caused to you and other students and make sure that this will not repeat in future. As the incident was beyond my control, I would request you to please do not impose any penalty or revoke my library rights. In any circumstance in the future, if I would not be able to return the study material, I will make sure that any of my friends return it. Your faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to apologize for not returning the books I took from your library last month.

I understand that as per the policy, I cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the books for more than 10 days and it is being 2 weeks. The reason I was not able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
them as I had met with an accident and fractured by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
leg. I
was admitted
to the hospital and was under heavy medication and completed missed the deadline or asking someone to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
the material on my behalf.

I
sincerely
Do not mix variants of the same word ('apologise' and 'apologize') within a single text.
apologised
for the inconvenience it would have caused to you and other students and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that this will not repeat
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

As the incident was beyond my control, I would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not impose any penalty or revoke my library rights. In any circumstance in the future, if I would not be able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
the study material, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that any of my friends
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
return
it.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter to the librarian for not returning books

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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