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apply for the job as receptionist Jwk1k
I was so excited when I have read a job advertisement on Indeed. com told that your hotel was hiring employees. Therefore, I would like to apply for the job as a receptionist in your hotel. I used to work as a receptionist for two years at the restaurant five months ago. My responsibilities include greeting guests, checking them in and out, answering the phone, and taking bookings. I think I am a perfect candidate for this job. I consider myself to be an intelligent, friendly and confident person. If you would like to, I can send references from my previous employer. Thank you for taking the time to evaluate my application to be a receptionist in your hotel. I am available for an interview any day in the morning. If my application is successful, I will be available to start work on 15 July.
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excited when I have read a job advertisement on
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com
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that your hotel was hiring employees.
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, I would like to apply for the job as a receptionist in your hotel.

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used
to work as a receptionist for two years at the restaurant five months ago. My responsibilities include greeting guests, checking them in and out, answering the phone, and taking bookings.

I
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think
I am a perfect candidate for this job. I consider myself to be an intelligent, friendly and confident person. If you would like to, I can
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send
references from my previous employer.

Thank you for taking the time to evaluate my application to be a receptionist in your hotel. I am available for an interview any day in the morning. If my application is successful, I will be available to
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work on 15 July.
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IELTS letter apply for the job as receptionist

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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