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Letter to orchestra to joining them

Letter to orchestra to joining them lR60X

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sam Thomas and I am writing this letter to let you know about my interest of joining your prestigious orchestra. I am a huge fan of your music and it will be an honour for me to work with you if given an opportunity. As you can see from my resume, I am a certified flute player and have an experience of 5 years working with a local school where I teach students how to play this instrument. I have also participated in regional and national level competitions where I received the first prizes. I hope that my experience and skills would be beneficial to your band and to myself also. Music and playing flute is not only my profession but a passion. I like listening to different sorts of music and also learning guitar which will add on to my existing skill set. If you find my profile suitable for a flute player in your orchestra, please contact me on 08452161630 to schedule an interview. I would look forward to a positive response. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas

Dear Sir or Madam,

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let
 you know about my interest of joining your prestigious orchestra. I am a huge fan of your music and it will be an Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.honor
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you if
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given
 an opportunity.

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see
 from my resume, I am a certified flute player and have an experience of 5 years working with a local school where I teach students how to play this instrument.

I have also
 participated in regional and national level competitions where I received the first
 prizes. I hope that my experience and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 would be beneficial to your band and to myself also
.

Music and playing flute is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 my profession This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a passion. I like listening to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 sorts of music and also
 learning guitar which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 on to my existing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 set.

If you find my profile suitable for a flute player in your orchestra, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 contact me on 08452161630 to schedule an interview.

I would look forward to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam Thomas