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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you to get clarity on a few concerns that I have on the shopping centre that ABC Constructions is planning to build near #32, home raod. I got to know about this as the construction company has blocked the main road that connects the residential area to the schools to begin with construction work. Though I am fully supportive of the fact that the area needs some great shopping centres but with this road blockage, school going childrens will face huge transportation issues. Although, the road blockage is not permanent but this will indeed effect not only the schools and childrens but parents as well as they will have to take a much longer route for the commute. Considering the fact that summer vacations are about to begin, I wanted to check with you that if you have some information on the construction timelines? Will it be possible to unblock the road for next couple of days and start the construction work again once the summer vacation starts. Looking forward for your favourable response. Yours sincerly, Steve
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you to
get
clarity on a few concerns that I have on the shopping
centre
that ABC
Constructions
is planning to build near #32, home
raod
.

I
got
to know about this as the
construction
company
has blocked the main
road
that connects the residential area to the schools to
begin
with
construction
work.

Though I am
fully
supportive of the fact that the area needs
some
great shopping
centres
but
with this
road
blockage, school going
childrens will
face huge transportation issues. Although, the
road
blockage is not permanent
but
this will
indeed
effect
not
only
the schools and
childrens
but
parents
as well
as they will
have to
take a much longer route for the commute.

Considering the fact that summer vacations are about to
begin
, I wanted to
check
with you that if you have
some
information on the
construction
timelines? Will it be possible to unblock the
road
for
next
couple of days and
start
the
construction
work again once the summer vacation
starts
.

Looking forward for your
favourable
response.

Yours
sincerly
,

Steve
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the council

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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