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Write a letter to the council

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you to get clarity on a few concerns that I have on the shopping centre that ABC Constructions is planning to build near #32, home raod. I got to know about this as the construction company has blocked the main road that connects the residential area to the schools to begin with construction work. Though I am fully supportive of the fact that the area needs some great shopping centres but with this road blockage, school going childrens will face huge transportation issues. Although, the road blockage is not permanent but this will indeed effect not only the schools and childrens but parents as well as they will have to take a much longer route for the commute. Considering the fact that summer vacations are about to begin, I wanted to check with you that if you have some information on the construction timelines? Will it be possible to unblock the road for next couple of days and start the construction work again once the summer vacation starts. Looking forward for your favourable response. Yours sincerly, Steve
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you to
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get
clarity on a few concerns that I have on the shopping
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centre
that ABC
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Constructions
is planning to build near #32, home
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raod
.

I
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got
to know about this as the
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construction
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company
has blocked the main
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road
that connects the residential area to the schools to
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begin
with
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construction
work.

Though I am
fully
supportive of the fact that the area needs
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some
great shopping
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centres
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but
with this
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road
blockage, school going
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childrens will
face huge transportation issues. Although, the
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road
blockage is not permanent
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but
this will
indeed
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effect
not
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only
the schools and
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childrens
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but
parents
as well
as they will
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have to
take a much longer route for the commute.

Considering the fact that summer vacations are about to
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begin
, I wanted to
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check
with you that if you have
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some
information on the
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construction
timelines? Will it be possible to unblock the
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road
for
next
couple of days and
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start
the
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construction
work again once the summer vacation
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starts
.

Looking forward for your
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favourable
response.

Yours
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sincerly
,

Steve

IELTS letter Write a letter to the council

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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