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you recently organised a party for your company at your hotel.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to give some feedback about the party that my company held at your hotel on 25th june 2021. The purpose of the party was to celebrate company's 20-year anniversary, also the birthday of our organization's founder. Event was thoroughly enjoyable, people of all ages had a great time. Special play area for children was an impressive idea. The staff were welcoming and attentive, provided proper supervision to all the guests. There were separate sections for veg and non-veg food, which was really important thing to consider. Also, proper dress code with name plates for staff members helps to identify them easily. I would like to suggest as decoration of the hall can be improved, like as per the type of party. The signage system to locate different areas, as some guests were not able to find restroom. Thank you for your cooperation. Yours faithfully, Manpreet kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to give
some
feedback about the party that my
company
held at your hotel on 25th
june
2021.

The purpose of the party was to celebrate
company
's 20-year anniversary,
also
the birthday of our organization's founder.
Event
was
thoroughly
enjoyable,
people
of all ages had a great time. Special play area for children was an impressive
idea
.

The staff were welcoming and attentive, provided proper supervision to all the guests. There were separate sections for veg and non-veg food, which was
really
important
thing to consider.
Also
, proper dress code with name plates for staff members
helps
to identify them
easily
.

I would like to suggest as decoration of the hall can be
improved
, like as per the type of party. The signage system to locate
different
areas, as
some
guests were not able to find restroom.

Thank you for your cooperation.

Yours
faithfully
,
Manpreet
kaur
.
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IELTS letter you recently organised a party for your company at your hotel.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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